I found this book last night and literally finished it in a day.

Very good story.TY

This book is like 4 never ending scenes in a movie. There’s no build up or timeline and it’s borderline confusing. Everything just blurs together. This could be a good story if it were carried out a little more strategically.

Funny story and good read.

Great read

Amusing, entertaining.

Like others have mentioned, this story was all over the place. I felt like I was jumping from short story to short story with very little to tie it together. I liked the story line and characters but it was confusing to follow and the editing/spell check is horrible.

Enjoyed - liked the novelty of the different characters in the story. It was with a sad heart to read about How the father treated his son. It brought to mind how many unknown father son lives do we see in our daily life’s without knowing if this same type of relationship exists behind their closed doors. It was a good read and I congratulate the author in her word smithing that carries the reader on an exciting adventure

This is one of the better books I have recently read online. Characters and other details are more developed and believable and I enjoyed book 1. Want to keep reading.

Loved the story....